svp vous pouvez regarder si ce que j'ai fais et bien ? il faut envoyer une lettre a son amie pour lui posee plein de question sur la route 66 hello how are you
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svp vous pouvez regarder si ce que j'ai fais et bien ?
il faut envoyer une lettre a son amie pour lui posee plein de question sur la route 66
hello how are you I hope that all is well! I am sending you this mail today to have some information on Route 66. you have a lot to visit this road so you can help me. in 1 month i am on vacation for 15 days and i want to visit route 66 all my work colleague are already going many times and he tell me a lot of beautiful chaos. Are you still so beautiful? . I saw on social networks a lot of beautiful pictures and it was my dream because my favorite film is turned on this wonderful road. why this road is very popular. it has existed since when, who builds it, why it is a pretty place. I have already visited the United States but not Route 66.
il faut envoyer une lettre a son amie pour lui posee plein de question sur la route 66
hello how are you I hope that all is well! I am sending you this mail today to have some information on Route 66. you have a lot to visit this road so you can help me. in 1 month i am on vacation for 15 days and i want to visit route 66 all my work colleague are already going many times and he tell me a lot of beautiful chaos. Are you still so beautiful? . I saw on social networks a lot of beautiful pictures and it was my dream because my favorite film is turned on this wonderful road. why this road is very popular. it has existed since when, who builds it, why it is a pretty place. I have already visited the United States but not Route 66.
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1. Réponse Elz
Voici quelques corrections, il y avait des fautes de conjugaisons et quelque fautes de forme mais sinom c'était bien:
Hello, how are you? I hope that you are doing well! I am sending you this mail to gain some information on Route 66 is you don't mind. I heard there is a lot to visit on this road so I hope you can help me. In one month my 15 days holiday is starting and I really want to visit Route 66. All my work colleagues have gone there so many times and they all tell me it's a beautiful chaos. Is it still so beautiful? On my social networks I saw many gorgeous pictures of it and going there has always been my dream as my favourite film was played on this wonderful road. Why is the road so popular? Since when does it exist and who built it? Why do people find it so pretty? I have already visited the United States but never got the chance to go to Route 66. Hope you can help me.
Kind regards.
Your friend